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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-06-30
내용 In Korea, our country had been under the monarchy for a long time.
After our country was independent from Japanese invasion, there was in a state of confusion.
At that time, coup happened, junta took power and controlled the press.
If the power is focus on one person and the period is long, the regime is accompanied with corruption.
In my second grade in university, many people especially university students including me demonstrated to destroy the military regime.
At last, Korea turns to real democratic country.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-07-01
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Great job, Rose!

In Korea, our country had been under the monarchy for a long time.
After our country was independent from the Japanese, there was a state of confusion.
At that time, a coup happened, junta took power and controlled the press.
If the power is focused on one person, and the period is long, the regime is accompanied by corruption.
In my second year of university, many people, especially university students, and me demonstrated to destroy the military regime.
At last, Korea turned into a real democratic country.

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