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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-07-04
내용 It’s hard to answer this question.
My kids are absorbed in listening music and they know about music a lot.
But I’m not big interested in hearing music.
Sometimes I listen to ballad music and I am consoled.
When I was a student, I learned playing the piano just a little.
Learning how to play instruments is not my interests.
But I want my kids to play the instruments and my youngest son is learning to play the violine.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-07-05
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Excellent job, Rose!

It’s hard to answer this question.
My kids are absorbed by music, and they know a lot about it.
But I’m not that interested in music.
Sometimes I listen to ballads, and I am consoled.
When I was a student, I learned piano a little.
Learning how to play instruments is not one of my interests.
But I want my kids to play instruments, and my youngest son is learning to play the violin.

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