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제목 | Please check my sentences gramatically (7.1) | 등록일 | 2016-07-04 |
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내용 | The rain spell has already started. I have to bring my unbrella wherever I go. In the day that I don't exercise, my condition is not good. Exercise makes me feel great. I don't hope to be raining tomorrow, because I will go wakeboarding. I will pray for god before I go to sleep, "Don't make rain." I hope to avoid rain during weekend. I don't care whether it's raining or not because I will just stay at the office. I have to sorry for him because his wife has an abortion. Fortunately his wife is good, so they can open wedding march. I think their mentality is not good. If I have my selfie stick, I don't need to ask someone to take our pictures. I take a lot of pictures during summer vacation. I put the best shot in the frame. And then, I put the frame on my desk. Although my work is stressful, but I'm ok when I see my family picture in the frame on my desk. Wedding march is only one day for thier lives. Brand new smartphone is enough to take good pictures. |
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담당강사 | Melanie1 | 등록일 | 2016-07-05 |
첨삭 내용 | Hi Jake here are the corrections: The rain has already started. I have to bring my unbrella wherever I go. |