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제목 | help, please | 등록일 | 2016-07-05 |
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내용 | Horror movies are very realistic and there are ardent many fans. But I don’t like those kinds of movies. I like adventurous and pleasant movies. The crime shoes make people stretch nerves and concentrate minds. After watching the show, they like to release tensions. Hollywood movies and business are leading the entertainment. My family liked to watch the X-men and my kid bought X-men mask and costume. Nowadays, many critic says that Hollywood goes bad and the materials are depleted. The theme of the past remakes but it’s completion is not perfect and funny. |
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담당강사 | Hunter1 | 등록일 | 2016-07-06 |
첨삭 내용 | Good job, Rose! Horror movies are very realistic, and there are many ardent fans. |