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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-07-05
내용 Horror movies are very realistic and there are ardent many fans.
But I don’t like those kinds of movies. I like adventurous and pleasant movies.
The crime shoes make people stretch nerves and concentrate minds.
After watching the show, they like to release tensions.
Hollywood movies and business are leading the entertainment.
My family liked to watch the X-men and my kid bought X-men mask and costume.
Nowadays, many critic says that Hollywood goes bad and the materials are depleted.
The theme of the past remakes but it’s completion is not perfect and funny.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-07-06
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Good job, Rose!

Horror movies are very realistic, and there are many ardent fans.
But I don’t like those kinds of movies. I like adventurous and pleasant movies.
The crime shows stretch people's nerves and force them to concentrate.
After watching the show, they like to release tensions.
Hollywood movies and business are leading the entertainment.
My family liked watching X-men, and my kid bought an X-men mask and costume.
Nowadays, many critics say that Hollywood is bad and the movies lack substance.
They remake lots of movies, but the new versions aren't as good as the original.

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