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제목 | Please check my sentences gramatically (7.5) | 등록일 | 2016-07-05 |
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내용 | I felt relieved that I could their face with happiness in the wedding march. When I prepared to get a job, I used to take a class from language institutes to obtain certifications like OPIc, TOEIC. I didn't care whether I went to academy alone or with friends. I'm a kind of outgoing person. I can get on like a house on a fire with everyone. If I want to concentrate on study, I study alone. If there are someone who study with me, I can't focus on my study. I'd have a chat with them. It is helpful to gather when I want to discuss specific subject. I think both cases would be good. I'm similar to you. I write the material on paper by hand. I love to draw mind map. Mind map motivate my brain remember material contents. I've noticed that you asked me about wedding march. My best friend smiled like a idiot during his wedding. I teased him a little bit, but he looked like he was on the top of the world. Guests have to pay money to couple as celebrate meaning. |
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담당강사 | Melanie1 | 등록일 | 2016-07-06 |
첨삭 내용 | I felt relief because I could see their happiness at the wedding March! |