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| 제목 | About 'Blackbeard Pirate' | 등록일 | 2016-07-07 |
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| 내용 | (Correct my writing, please) Hi, Rebeca. This is Leo. Today morning, we talked about Scuba diving. And you talked 'Blackbeard Pirate'. So, I search about that in internet. 'Blackbeard Pirate' is one of most scared pirate and he is Englishman. Internet said, The story of Blackbeard Pirate inspired the popular Disney series 'The pirates of the Carribbean'. I like Baseball and my one of favorite MLB team is 'Pittsburgh Pirates' . But, first time you said 'Blackbeard Pirate' I can't understand that means. After class I laughed myself. English is so difficult.^^.. Maybe, during the class my sentence have a lot of fault. So as many as possible correct for me, please. Thank you for your help. See you tomorrow. |
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| 담당강사 | Rebecca1 | 등록일 | 2016-08-10 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Leo was no longer my student the day after I received this message. I apologize for the delay in responding.
This morning, we talked about scuba diving, and you talked about "Blackbeard the Pirate", so I searched for that on the internet. Blackbeard the Pirate was one of the most scary pirates and he was an Englishman. The story of Blackbeard inspired the popular Disney series "The Pirates of the Caribbean". I like baseball and one of my favorite MLB teams is the Pittsburgh Pirates, but the first time you said "Blackbeard the Pirate", I couldn't understand what that meant. After class, I laughed to myself. English is so difficult! |
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