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제목 | Today, What I wanted to say.... | 등록일 | 2016-07-07 |
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내용 | Hi. Tristan~ I was very glad about your prompt reply. It's very helpful to me, especially about the business expression like 'marternity leave'. And I have questions today too. When I was talking about weekend's plan, I wanted to say "I expect to go a water park.". I forgot the word "expect" at that time, and now I'm confused whether it is proper word in that case or not. I meant that I'm waiting it. One more, you corrected what I said;"My daughter feels hard to apart from me every morning." to "I thinkd it's hard for my daughter to part ways with me every morning." Thank you for your correction. I learn the word "part ways". I wonder if there is difference between 'apart from' and 'part ways'. Sorry for bothering you and thank you! Have a nice day~~~~~ |
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담당강사 | Tristan1 | 등록일 | 2016-07-08 |
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First thing first you're not bothering me with these requests as a matter a fact I'm glad that you're doing this because it shows initiative and with that you can go to a lot of places in life; now as far as your corrections go........ I expect to go a water park = incorrect; " I expect to go *to a water park " = Correct; the only thing you left out was the prepostion ' TO. ' However; it's a better fit to express this expression in its ' FUTURE TENSE ' form which is: " I am expecting to go to water park this weekend. " In regards to your feelings about whether ' EXPECT ' was the correct or proper word to use for this given expression you were correct so just trust your gut instict more; if you're wrong well that's what I'm here for never be afrarid to make mistakes because mistakes are how we learn and grow as people. And lastly the phrase " Part Ways " and the word " Apart " have the same meaning, but if you are persistant with using the word, " Apart " then let's try: " My daugther feels like it is hard for her to be apart from me in the mornings. "
Hope this helps Joey! Peace, Teacher Tristan
Hi. Tristan~ |