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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-07-08
내용 Some civil servants whom I know are acting as artists like painters and musicians.
At first, they are interested in learning as hobbies but as time passes by, they participate in art contest and get the prize.
Although they are not so popular, I envy them.
Nowadays, I feel heavy with my job.
Of course, I love my work and work hard but I am tired of everydat trivials.
I don't know what my dream is.
Until now, I think I do my best in my current situation.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-07-11
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Great job today, Rose :)

Some civil servants whom I know are also artists. They are painters and musicians.
At first, they were interested in learning as a hobby, but as time passed, they participated in art contests and won prizes.
Although they are not so popular, I envy them.
Nowadays, I have lots of pressure from my job.
Of course, I love my work, and I work hard, but I am tired of everyday, trivialities.
I don't know what my dream is. I think I do my best in my current situation.

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