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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-07-11
내용 Frankly, I don’t think about LGBT(Lesibian, Gay, Bisexual and Transgender) deeply.
In the past, I thought that LGBT is western countries’ problems.
The news sometimes broadcasts some gay and lesibian situations of other countries.
Gay and Lesibian are also hot issue in Korea now.
A few days ago, gay group protested to keep their rights downtown in Taegu.
But the conservative group demonstrated to disapprove gay at aother places.
Gay couples are living shade places not sunny sites.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-07-12
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Great job, Rose!

Frankly, I don’t think about the LGBT(Lesibian, Gay, Bisexual and Transgender) community deeply.
In the past, I thought that LGBT was an issue in western countries.
The news sometimes broadcasts gay and lesibian situations of other countries.
Gay and Lesibian rights are also hot issues in Korea now.
A few days ago, a gay group protested in downtown Taegu to keep their rights.
But the conservative group demonstrated their disapproval of gays at aother places.
Gay couples are living in the shade, not the sunlight.

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