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제목 Remind 등록일 2016-07-11
내용 Whenever I go to the restaurant, it reminds me of my ex-girlfriend.

In fact, I went to the restaurant with her many times and I have had many memories with her there.

That's why I go there sometimes.
담당강사 Beth1 등록일 2016-07-12
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Whenever I go to the restaurant, it reminds me of my ex-girlfriend.

In fact, I went to the restaurant with her many times and I have made many memories with her there.

That's why I go there sometimes.

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Great sentences. I only made one small correction. Using the word "had" is not bad but using the word "made" makes the sentence a little clearer. 

Teacher Beth

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