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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-07-14
내용 I don’t know possibility to turn water into fuel so much.
But I hope that it’ll be come true somedat.
I think that one of the most natural resourceses is sun.
Scientistes are studying of turning sun into energy and that is commercial.
A month ago the picture of satellite at NASA shows how serious Korea’s air pollution is.
Yhey are saying that this is the vehicle’s exhaust gas.
This is the main cause of global warming.
The developed countries want to regulate carbon footprint but the underdeveloped countries don’t agree this suggestion.
I hope that the sustitute resource will be found or developed not to pollute our earth in the near future.
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-07-15
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Great job, Rose!

I don’t know the possibilities of turning water into fuel so much.
But I hope that it’ll come true someday.
I think that one of the most natural resourceses is the sun.
Scientistes are studying turning sunlight into energy that can be used commercially.
A month ago a satellite picture from NASA showed how serious Korea’s air pollution is.
They are saying that this is caused by exhaust from vehicles.
This is the main cause of global warming.
The developed countries want to regulate carbon, but the underdeveloped countries don’t agree with this suggestion.
I hope that a substitute resource will be found or developed that doesn't pollute our earth in the near future.

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