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제목	Please check my sentences gramatically (7.14)	등록일	2016-07-18
내용	If I drink soju a lot, I have to suffer from awful headache nextday. In the past, there was only way to read newspaper using paper material. I can approach millions of articles mort than in the past. It is a piece of cake to read articles. We just search internet. Even I can listen to articles from my smartphone or PC because the technology have already made progress. Thanks to this advancement, blind person can understand articles although they can't see anything. Subscribing to newpaper is a traditional way to read articles. There are some articles that makes me sad and upset about war, accidents etc. North korea is gradually going insane. They would be more crazy than now. If china and us make war with each other, Korea may be involved in the war regardless of our intention. Although they are wiser than me, they don't have solution to solve the problem about north korea. If I were them, I try to come up with ideas with people.
담당강사	Melanie1	등록일	2016-07-19
첨삭 내용	If I drink soju a lot, I will suffer a awful headache the next day. In the past, you could only get a newspaper by printed text. I can read many articles by internet than by printed text. It is easier to read articles online. We can just search the internet for the news. Due to advancing technology, I can listen to news by smartphone or computers. Thanks to this advancement, a blind person can access the news. Subscribing to newpaper is a traditional way to read articles. There are some articles that make me sad and upset such as war, accidents, and other sad stories. North korea is gradually going insane. They are even crazier now. If china and us make war with each other, Korea may be involved in the war regardless of our intention. Even though other countries are wise, they still dont have a solution for the ongoing problem with North Korea. If I were them, I try to come up with ideas.