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제목	Please check my sentences gramatically (7.15)	등록일	2016-07-19
내용	I hope him to feel better. I can't imagine him crying. He is revered as a father figure by our department. I wish him cheer up as soon as possible. The biggest sadness is when someone lost their spouse. He has already used his day off for 3 days. Company allows 3 day off to employees who their family passed away. It is essential and needed to employees. Have you experience to lose your family? My grandfather's face always portrayed nothing without smile. One day, I came to leave from the military. I suggested him to show his smile to me. It was his first smile that I had never seen. It was the last moment with him. I went back to military and I got the news that he passed away in a short time. I couldn't realize the news because I'd never thought that he would die someday. I realized his death when I saw his picture in his funeral. Opening funeral for 3 days is common in korea. 3 day is normal funeral period. His tomb is located in national cemetery.
담당강사	Melanie1	등록일	2016-07-20
첨삭 내용	I hope he feels better. I can't imagine him crying. He is revered as a father figure by our department. I hope he cheers up as soon. It is a very sad situation when someone loses a spouse. He has already used his three days off. The company allows employees to have three days when they have a family member who has passed away. This is essential to employees. Have you ever experienced to losing a loved one? My grandfather never smiled. One day, I came home from the military and I suggested for my grandfather to smile. That was the first time I saw him smile. It was my last moment with him. When I got back to base, I recieved the news that he passed away. It was hard for me to accept the news because I'd never thought that he would die suddnely. I realized his death when I saw his picture in his funeral. Three days is a common amount of time for a funeral in Korea. 3 days is the normal funeral period. His tomb is located in national cemetery.