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제목	Please check my sentences gramatically (7.18)	등록일	2016-07-19
내용	I helped my boss by moving his father's coffin to tomb. I hope, when he comes back, he feels relief and better than now. If I go to mug festival, enjoying with mug puts hot weather out of my head. There are tons of pictures that many foreigners were taken during festival. You can see their happy smile through the pictures. There were a lot of people who were secrificed by the coup. President repressed the coup. I think sacifice will increase, because president revenge against army involving in the coup. I couldn't imagine that coup would happen until now. I've thought coup is just old fashioned event, not reality. The newspaper is helpful to come up with my knowledge. When I have no time on my hands, I avoid doing anything except for my work. Sad story has a great effect on my daily life, for example when I work at the office, meet someone and so on.
담당강사	Melanie1	등록일	2016-07-20
첨삭 내용	I helped my boss by being a pallbreaer for him. I hope, when he comes back, he feels better. If I go to mud festival I can have fun and not focus on the heat. There are tons of pictures that many foreigners were taken during festival. You can see their smiles in the pictures. There were a lot of people who were secrificed by the coup. President repressed the coup. I think sacifice will increase, because president revenge against army involving in the coup. It never occurred to me that the coup would happen. I've thought coup is just old fashioned event and did not apply to today. The newspaper gives me knowledge. When I have free time I try to avoid doing work. Sad stories affect my life.