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제목	help, please	등록일	2016-07-20
내용	Three months ago, April thirteenth was election day of National Assembly. Voter turnout was almost over fifty percent. Owing to problems of the ruling party’s nomination, the ruling party was substituted the opposition party. Many people critize politicians and their promises and don’t vote the election. To change our society, politicians’duty or role is very important, but they are just fighting to keeo their interests no thinking about their citizens. The end of next year will be a presidential election. I hope that first-of-all truly people and competent president will elected.
담당강사	Hunter1	등록일	2016-07-21
첨삭 내용	Great job, Rose! Three months ago, April thirteenth was election day of the National Assembly. Voter turnout was almost over fifty percent. Because of problems belonging to the ruling party’s nomination, the ruling party was substituted the opposition party. Many people critize politicians and their promises and don’t vote. To change our society, politicians’ duty or role is very important, but they are just fighting to keep their interests and do not think about their citizens. At the end of next year there will be a presidential election. I hope that we elect a competent president.