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제목 Please check my sentences gramatically (7.19) 등록일 2016-07-20
내용 I don't know the actor's name who starred in the movie.
The movie story is about magic tricksters.
It was heavy raining for whole last weekend.

Before that time, I had never been to go camping and outside activities with my father.
The camping place was far from my house. So we had to ride father's vehicle for almost 2 hours.
It was tough to ride a car for a long time as a little kid.

I expect the day that we go camping again before this year would be finished.

Camping places in Korea is safe from animals.
There are fenses that defense us from them.
If we find out animals, we can call 911.
The police is nearby almost every camping place in korea.

If I don't want to get any risk, I must not go outside and enjoy activities.

Sometimes he picked me up, when he went to waterski.
I was not enough old to enjoy waterski.
The only thing that I could do was to fall down on the water.
If I should've done waterski from that time, I would be good at ski like a pro.
담당강사 Melanie1 등록일 2016-07-21
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I don't know the actor's name who starred in the movie.
The movie story is about magicians.
It rained very heavy last weekend.

I have never been camping or participated in outdoor activities with my father.
The campground was far from my house and the drive took us two hours.
As a kid that was a tough car ride.

We should go camping before the years end.

Camping places in Korea is safe from animals.
There are fences that protect us.
If we find animals, we can call 911.
There is police presence at almost every campground.

If I dont want any problems I must not go outside and enjot the activities.

Sometimes he picked me up when we were waterskiing.
I was not enough old to waterski.
The only thing that I could do was to fall down on the water.
If I had learned to waterski at a young age, I could be a pro by now.

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