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제목	Please check my sentences gramatically (7.20)	등록일	2016-07-20
내용	We went camping by using my car. It happend a problem on the highway. Suddenly my car was out of order. I checked my car and I got the reason. One of tires was flat. Even though I didn't know how to fix my car, one of my friends who were in our group was a perfect handy man. After this incident, I never forget to check up my car before I go to somewhere. We fish along the river and have fun in the swimming pool. Although kids are careful about everything, they are careless. So guardians must always keep an eye on kids. One day, she blacked out and falled down on the street because of awful cramps. She has to get chances to intruct many people as a freelancer instructor. She doesn't have full time job. If she has a course to intruct, she can do it. But, If she doesn't have a course to intruct, she have to search other course. Almost jobs in korea are not qualified such as low pay, long working time. Only a few people use their english while they work.
담당강사	Melanie1	등록일	2016-07-21
첨삭 내용	We drove to the camground in my car. I happened to have a problem on the highway. I was experiencing car trouble. I checked over my car and found I had a flat tire. I did not know how to change a tire but my friend could. Because of that incident, I always check my car before going on a roadtrip. We fish along the river and have fun in the swimming pool. Although kids are careful about everything, they can be careless. Parents must always keep an eye on their kids. One day, she had blackedout and fell down due to cramping. She has the opportunity to teach people as a freelancer instructor. She doesn't have full time job. I am confident she can instruct people well. But, If she doesn't have a course to intruct she has to search for courses. Jobs in Korea are offering low wages and long working hours. Only a few people use their english while they work.