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제목 help, please 등록일 2016-07-22
내용 The rate of economy growth is slow down and there are hard for people to get jobs.
Big companies are unwiling to hire new recruiters because of economic uncertainity.
Young people and early retiree try to study to be civil servants or open new restaurants.
Gumi and Pohang city in Gyeongbuk were major companies but they moved another cities and many workies here were out of job.
Pohang city was famous for steel industry but that is competitive other countries like China and business profit doesn’t work.
These cities will be hard to survive if the dovernment doesn’t set up the special measures.
The world economy is connected country-to-country and is affected each other.
I wish every countryon earth lives happily and well
담당강사 Hunter1 등록일 2016-07-25
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Great job, Rose!!!

The rate of economic growth has slowed down, and it is hard for people to find jobs.
Big companies are unwiling to hire new recruites because of economic uncertainity.
Young people and early retirees try to study to be civil servants or open new restaurants.
Gumi and Pohang city in Gyeongbuk had major companies, but they moved to other cities and many workers lost their jobs.
Pohang city was famous for steel, but that is a competitive industry with other countries like China and profits dwindled.
It will be hard for these cities to survive if the government doesn’t set up special measures.
The world economy is connected country-to-country and they affect each other.
I wish every country on Earth lives happily and well.

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