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제목 | today's script | 등록일 | 2016-07-22 |
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내용 | I live in a studio apartment for five years. Because I left hometown to work. My house is 14 floors. and has a variety of furniture. My house has a bed, computer, TV, washing machine, refrigerator and so on. Even though my house is small, it is very modern and well-organized. and There are many cultural facilities around the house For instance, the supermarkets, movie theaters and more. In my free time at home, I like to watch tv all day long. because Iam very comfortable while watching TV. Plus, watching tv makes me relaxed alot because I don't need to think any thing. |
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담당강사 | Christine2 | 등록일 | 2016-07-22 |
첨삭 내용 | I have lived in a studio apartment for five years. My house is on the 14th floor and has a variety of furniture. My house has a bed, computer, TV, washing machine, and refrigerator .Although my house is small, it is very modern and well-organized. There are many cultural facilities around my house. For instance ,supermarkets and movie theaters. I like to watch TV during my free time because I feel very comfortable watching TV at home. Watching TV makes me feel relaxed because I don't have to think about any thing.
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