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제목 today's script 등록일 2016-07-22
내용 I live in a studio apartment for five years. Because I left hometown to work.
My house is 14 floors. and has a variety of furniture.

My house has a bed, computer, TV, washing machine, refrigerator and so on.
Even though my house is small, it is very modern and well-organized.
and There are many cultural facilities around the house
For instance, the supermarkets, movie theaters and more.

In my free time at home, I like to watch tv all day long. because Iam very comfortable while watching TV.
Plus, watching tv makes me relaxed alot because I don't need to think any thing.
담당강사 Christine2 등록일 2016-07-22
첨삭 내용

I  have lived in a studio apartment for five years. My house is  on the 14th floor and has a variety of furniture. My house has a bed, computer, TV, washing machine, and refrigerator .Although my house is small, it is very modern and well-organized. There are many cultural facilities around my house. For instance ,supermarkets and  movie theaters. I like to watch TV during my free time because I  feel  very comfortable  watching TV at home. Watching TV makes me feel relaxed  because I don't have to think about any thing.

 

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