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제목	help, please	등록일	2016-07-25
내용	It’s not easy for me to tell you who my favorite singer is. I like many singers, so I can’t pick just one person up. Nowadays, idol singers are mainstreaming in Korea. They have trained very hard at least for seven to eight years. When they are debut, they are good at singing and dancing. I don’t know that they sing sings lyric but I know only their melody’s feelings. I went to see singers’ concert several times. The stars seemed to prepare the performance so much and audience also enjoyed althogether. I like to see the performance, but the ticket prices are expensive.
담당강사	Hunter1	등록일	2016-07-26
첨삭 내용	Great job, Rose!! It’s not easy for me to tell you who my favorite singer is. I like many singers, so I can’t pick just one. Nowadays, idol singers are popular in Korea. They have trained very hard for at least seven to eight years. When they debut, they are good at singing and dancing. I don’t know their lyrics, but their melodies are nice. I've been to see see certain singers in concert several times. The stars seemed to prepare a lot for the performance, and everyone in the audience enjoyed the show together. I like to see the performance, but the ticket prices are expensive.