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제목 Bus Just intrude my lane. 등록일 2016-08-12
내용 i'm trying to mimic the car accident that happened yesterday.

My bus was heading to the 2nd lane, suddenly the big truck try to intrude my lane, so my

bus suddenly stopped. and the bus following my bus hit the back side of my bus, so some

people got back and neck injuries.
담당강사 Richard1 등록일 2016-08-17
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i'm trying to mimic (To "mimic" is to imitate, to try to do the same thing. It might be better to say something like "explain.") the car accident that happened yesterday.

My bus was heading to the 2nd lane, suddenly the big truck tried to intrude into my lane, so my

bus suddenly stopped. and the bus following my bus hit the back side of my bus, so some

people got back and neck injuries.

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