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| 제목 | Drop by | 등록일 | 2016-09-06 |
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| 내용 | Today one of my friends will open a bbq restaurant in Suwon. So I will drop by his restuarant with some of my friends this Saturday to celebrate the opening. |
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| 담당강사 | Beth1 | 등록일 | 2016-09-06 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Today, one of my friends will open a bbq restaurant in Suwon. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- The grammar in these sentences looks good. The only corrections I made was to add a few commas. I added the commas because it separates needed information from unneeded information. If you remove "today" and "this Saturday" from the sentences they would still be complete. Ex: One of my friends will open a bbq restaurant in Suwon. So I will drop by his restaurant with some of my friends to celebrate the opening. Teacher Beth
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