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제목 Injection 등록일 2016-11-07
내용 I stayed home all day long during weekend. I had back ache. I visited at hospital. I got a Injection. At last time, I got a acupuncture. I want to be good quickly. I should have got appropriate treatment as painful areas.
담당강사 Ronna2 등록일 2016-11-08
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I stayed home all day long during weekend. I had back ache. I visited at hospital. I got a Injection. At last time, I got a acupuncture. I want to be good quickly. I should have got appropriate treatment as painful areas.

 

--I visited the hospital.

-- The last time,

I want to be cured fast/ I want to get well

I should have get proper treatment in painful areas

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