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제목 | My holiday | 등록일 | 2017-06-08 |
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내용 | It was a holiday at Thusday this week. I took a rest and went to mountain with my family. We started early in the morning so that didn't meet traffic jam. The weather was very clear and a little hot in the afternoon. That place had a good scenery because that was located at the lakeside. Firts, We boarded a small ferry so we could feel more pleasure. Then, We took a walk about 2 hours along the lake. Although i was tired that day, i had a happy time. If i have enough time and money, i try to take a trip in foreign country with my family. |
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담당강사 | Allie2 | 등록일 | 2017-06-08 |
첨삭 내용 | It was a holiday at Thusday this week. It was a holiday for me from Saturday to Tuesday this week. I took a rest and went to mountain with my family. I took a rest from work and decided to go to the mountains with my family. We started early in the morning so that didn't meet traffic jam. . . . so we won't meet any traffic jam. The weather was very clear and a little hot in the afternoon. The weather was very clear and warm in the afternoon. That place had a good scenery because that was located at the lakeside. That place we headed to had a good scenery because it was located at a lakeside. Firts, We boarded a small ferry so we could feel more pleasure. First, we boarded a small ferry so we could enjoy more. Then, We took a walk about 2 hours along the lake. When we got there, we took a walk for about 2 hours along the lake. Although i was tired that day, i had a happy time. Although I felt tired, I had a happy time. / Although I got tired, I really enjoyed this day with my family. If i have enough time and money, i try to take a trip in foreign country with my family. If I had enough time and money, I would try to take a trip abroad with my family. |