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제목 My holiday 등록일 2017-06-08
내용 It was a holiday at Thusday this week.
I took a rest and went to mountain with my family.
We started early in the morning so that didn't meet traffic jam.
The weather was very clear and a little hot in the afternoon.
That place had a good scenery because that was located at the lakeside.
Firts, We boarded a small ferry so we could feel more pleasure.
Then, We took a walk about 2 hours along the lake.
Although i was tired that day, i had a happy time.
If i have enough time and money, i try to take a trip in foreign country with my family.
담당강사 Allie2 등록일 2017-06-08
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It was a holiday at Thusday this week.

It was a holiday for me from Saturday to Tuesday this week.

I took a rest and went to mountain with my family.

I took a rest from work and decided to go to the mountains with my family.

We started early in the morning so that didn't meet traffic jam.

. . . so we won't meet any traffic jam.

The weather was very clear and a little hot in the afternoon.

The weather was very clear and warm in the afternoon.

That place had a good scenery because that was located at the lakeside.

That place we headed to had a good scenery because it was located at a lakeside.

Firts, We boarded a small ferry so we could feel more pleasure.

First, we boarded a small ferry so we could enjoy more.

Then, We took a walk about 2 hours along the lake.

When we got there, we took a walk for about 2 hours along the lake.

Although i was tired that day, i had a happy time.

Although I felt tired, I had a happy time. / Although I got tired, I really enjoyed this day with my family.

If i have enough time and money, i try to take a trip in foreign country with my family.

If I had enough time and money, I would try to take a trip abroad with my family.

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