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제목 please check it~! I sent an email to the bank 등록일 2017-06-15
내용 Hi There. My internet banking has locked. So I haven't been useing so long time. what can I do for using again?? I'm Korean. If there is some korean staff I'd like to contact with them. Please give me a reply asap ^^ Sincerely, Ju yeong Park






Is there any wrong?? please let me know.. It's very improtant.. ㅠㅠ
담당강사 Grace 등록일 2017-06-15
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Hi There.

Hi there.

My internet banking has locked.

My online banking has been locked.  

So I haven't been useing so long time.

 I didn't use it for a long time.

what can I do for using again??

What should  I do to be able to use it again?

I'm Korean.

I'm a Korean.

If there is some korean staff I'd like to contact with them.

If there is someone who is also a Korean, I'd like to talk to him or her.

Please give me a reply asap ^^

Please give me a reply ASAP.  ^^

Sincerely, Ju yeong Park

Sincerely,

Ju yeong Park


Is there any wrong??

Is there something wrong?

please let me know..

Please let me know..

It's very improtant.. ㅠㅠ

It's very important. ㅠㅠ

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