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제목 | 2018.4.4. dairy | 등록일 | 2018-04-05 |
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내용 | on coming back to home, after school, i want to eat pizza. so i request this to my mom. and i have a nap, after a few times, i wake up. and my mom prepare our dinner. but, there isn't the pizza that i want to eat.... so i very dissapointed. so, i ask mom why didn't she buy it, and my mom answered, ' i think you wake by next morning'!!! so, unwillingly, i ater korean cuisine...... |
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담당강사 | NancyP2 | 등록일 | 2018-04-06 |
첨삭 내용 | On coming back home after school, I wanted to eat pizza. So, I requested this to my mom and I went to take a nap. After some time, I woke up. My mom had prepared our dinner but, there wasn't the pizza that I had wanted to eat.... so, I was very disappointed! Thanks for sending this to me, Gyeongmin! I really enjoyed reading it and I hope that the corrections help!! Hope to talk to you again tomorrow night!!! ~ Nancy |