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제목 my weenkend 등록일 2018-04-09
내용 this is first weekend in april.and i am really happy because i have a break
so, i slept almost 10 times and eat very much;; chicken, pizza, pasta and so on
and i dont do any exercise and playing work.
so i get more weight..... it is very sad
but!!! i solved my stress and tiring.. it is really good situation
after tomorrow, i will do study really hard and i will do exercise hardly..
i want to have more time to enhance my alone activity!!!!
and you?? how about your weekend?
담당강사 NancyP2 등록일 2018-04-10
첨삭 내용

This is THE first weekend in April and I am really happy because I have a break!
So, I slept almost 10 HOURS and I ATE A TON;; chicken, pizza, pasta and so on.
I DIDN'T do any exercise and OR ANY work.
So, I GAINED more weight..... THAT is very sad!
BUT, IT solved my stress and TIREDNESS. It is A really good situation!
After tomorrow, I will study really hard and I will exercise VIGOROUSLY.
I want to have more time to enhance my alone ACTIVITIES!!!!
And you?? How about your weekend? {IT WAS REALLY NICE!  THANKS, MINA!!}

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