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제목 Unit2. Movie 등록일 2018-05-10
내용 Unfortunately, I can write up to 600 bytes at a time. I will write more messages in "To Teacher" board.
It is my script for this class.

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I love action or SF movie like Avengers, Hulk and Mission impossible series.
Do you know Mission impossible?
It is my favorite movie.
It is a story of a man who clears impossible missions.
In fact, I like Tom Cruise who is main character of this movie more than movie story.
He is strong, clever and never loses like powerful hero.
I really want to be like him.
The movie delivers an instructive message about bad guys always die.
담당강사 Madie 등록일 2018-05-10
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Unfortunately, I can write up to 600 bytes at a time. I will write more messages in "To Teacher" board.
It is my script for this class.

**
I love action or SF movie like Avengers, Hulk and Mission Impossible series.
Do you know Mission impossible?
It is my favorite movie.
It is a story of a man who makes impossible missions.
In fact, I like Tom Cruise who is main  the  character of this movie.He is strong, clever and never loses like powerful hero.
I really want to be like him.
The movie delivers a conclusive  message that  bad guys always die.

- Please refer to some corrections that i did in your script-

thank you -- Teacher Madie

 

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