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| 제목 | 25th,July,2018 | 등록일 | 2018-07-26 |
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| 내용 | I went the beach I have worked from at that time when a half of July started. I expected there were few people I have to manage.But, There were 70 people(almost 20 family or they might be coulples). That's reason the people I am supposed to manage are workers in Samsung. So, They are working weekday. It is on vacation period eventhough. Workers in Korea usually get an vacation onlt one or two days(if it is included, theirs will be 3-4days.) | ||
| 담당강사 | Ethel | 등록일 | 2018-07-26 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I went to the beach I have a work at that time when the half of July started. I expected there were few people I have to manage. But, there were 70 people(almost 20 families including couples). That's reason the people I am supposed to manage are workers in Samsung. So, they are working on weekdays. It was vacation period eventhough. Workers in Korea usually have their vacation only one or two days (if it is included, they will be having 4 to 4 days.) Hi, Thank you for writing. I really appreciate your effort. Keep on writing to enhance more your English skill. Teacher Ethel ^^
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