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제목 I go to the hometown 등록일 2020-05-06
내용 I am going to my hometown this holiday.
I am going to visit Seonyudo on the way
the island has a pretty sand beach, so it would be good for children to play
And there is also the famous Iseongdang bakery.

I was able to discover the beauty of seonyudo through internet search
if I go to the seonyudo , I want to walk on the sandy beach with my children
and when I get a chance, I want to go to a reataurant
담당강사 Henry1 등록일 2020-05-06
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I am going to my hometown this holiday.
I am going to visit Seonyudo on the way.
The island has a pretty sandy beach, so it would be good for my children to have fun.
And you can also fine there the famous Iseongdang Bakery.

I was able to discover the beauty of Seonyudo through the Internet.
If I go to Seonyudo, I want to walk on the sandy beach with my children and I want to try some restaurants if I have a chance.

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