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| 제목 | Self introduction 2 | 등록일 | 2020-07-08 |
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| 내용 | Regarding my job, I have been working for a department store over 15years. It was my first job, fortunately. Now, I have a position of a team manager in food&living division in H.Q. I really love to go camping with my son whenever we can reserve a camping site, so that, my son can make great memories when he is in childhood. When we go camping, my wife has enough rest in our home. I think this is all I can say about my self. Many thanks for listening. |
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| 담당강사 | Daya1 | 등록일 | 2020-07-15 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Regarding my job, I have been working for a department store over 15years. It was my first job. Fortunately, now I have a position as a team manager in food&living division in H.Q. |
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