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| 제목 | subject explanation2 | 등록일 | 2020-07-09 |
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| 내용 | ● Training program for teachers or specialized instructor training course of Youth election education. ● Subjects and materials that your organization considers important in relation to youth election education(democracy education). (Subjects may be further subdivided. Youth perspective formation, information judgment, media literacy, discussion, debate skills may also be selected. Although the main interesting issue is electoral education in high school, the issues could be widened to democracy education in schools and outside. We welcome your suggestions always.) thank you for your help! |
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| 담당강사 | Vanessa2 | 등록일 | 2020-07-09 |
| 첨삭 내용 | Hello there!
You might want to add more details here: a slight improvement here on consistency: Although the main interesting issue is electoral education in high school, the issues could be widened to democracy education in schools and outside. Although the main interesting issue is electoral education in high school, the issues COULD WIDEN to democracy education in schools and outside. a slight improvement here on word choice ( in relation to is a bit wordy) : Subjects and materials that your organization considers important in relation to youth election education(democracy education. Subjects and materials that your organization considers important CONCERNING youth election education(democracy education. |
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