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제목 1 등록일 2020-08-06
내용 Thank you for your e-mail.
We very much appreciate that you have responded positively to our suggestion and it is a pleasure to implementation of the project with you.

It is very impressive what KMOP has done so far. There seems to be a lot of content that we really want to know. Development of contents, training modules for trainers, organization of train the trainer's sessions, especially gamified virtual collaboration platform would be definitely an attractive subject to the Korean peoples. Please share your expertise with us.

Hi, Vanessa ~ Do all the sentences are formal?
담당강사 Vanessa2 등록일 2020-08-07
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Thank you for your e-mail.
We very much appreciate that you have responded positively to our suggestion and it is a pleasure to implementation of the project with you.


- We greatly appreciate that  you...


-it is a pleasure to implement this project with you.

It is very impressive what KMOP has done so far. There seems to be a lot of content that we really want to know. Development of contents, training modules for trainers, organization of train the trainer's sessions, especially gamified virtual collaboration platform would be definitely an attractive subject to the Korean peoples. Please share your expertise with us.


Korean peoples - take note!


When you refer to the people of a single ethnic group or nationality, always use the word people.

example: The people of China no lomger need to abide by the one child policy.


Peoples is only used in cases when it is necessary to  distinguish between ethnic groups within the same


geographical or cultural context.


example: The Isralei and Palestinian peoples have long been at war.

 

Hi, Vanessa ~ Do all the sentences are formal? - Are all sentences formal enough? -Yes they are formal enough.

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