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제목 E-mail part1 등록일 2020-09-18
내용 I hope all is well with you
I have modified a little of the file you sent us and attached it again.
We decided to include it without changing the format as it is since it seems to be easier to read the article in Q&A. Once again, thank you very much for your efforts.

It would be very appreciated if you could give us additional help.

1) Please fill up the new no.1 question "Introduction of ZPB". There are already answers to ZPB's activities and roles, but it would be good to start with a brief introduction before entering the article.
담당강사 Vanessa2 등록일 2020-09-18
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I hope all is well with you
I have modified a little of the file you sent us and attached it again.
We decided to include it without changing the format as it is since it seems to be easier to read the article in Q&A. Once again, thank you very much for your efforts.
-We decided to include it without the format/

We decided to include it as it is without changing the format..

It seems to be easier reading the article in Q&A


It would be very appreciated if you could give us additional help.

1) Please fill up the new no.1 question "Introduction of ZPB". There are already answers to ZPB's activities and roles, but it would be good to start with a brief introduction before entering the article.

-Please fill out the new no.1 question ..

-but a brief  introduction would sound like a good start before getting in the article.

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