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제목 E-mail part3 등록일 2020-09-18
내용 The advice "not only to focus on the elections" was a great conclusion. Thanks for the good advice.
Nevertheless, and we are a national election organization, and this year is the first year young students became new voters, so please understand that we will prioritize election-related materials this time publications. (We are planning to expand to more various youth democracy education next year!)
담당강사 Vanessa2 등록일 2020-09-18
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The advice "not only to focus on the elections" was a great conclusion. Thanks for the good advice.
Nevertheless, and we are a national election organization, and this year is the first year young students became new voters, so please understand that we will prioritize election-related materials this time publications. (We are planning to expand to more various youth democracy education next year!)

Nevertheless, we are a national...

-we will prioritize eletion-related materials this time......publications? ( I don't understand why the word "publublication" is in this sentence and position in the sentence)

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