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제목 Project 등록일 2020-10-06
내용 The most memorable project I've worked on is premium grocery store project.
I worked for a reading retail company as a food buyer and we started to differenciate us from our cometitors.
The reason why this project is very special is this store was a first real premium grcery store in Korea. It was simply so similar to Whole foods market in the U.S. The store had many kinds of organic food and exotic imported grocery and also, the mood of store such as interior, lighting and signages are very special and luxurious.The project was a big success, and our cometitors started some similar project.
담당강사 Marilee1 등록일 2020-10-07
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The most memorable project I've worked on was a premium grocery store project.
I worked for a reading retail company as a food buyer and we started to differentiate ourselves from our competitors.
The reason why this project is very special is becaues this store was a first real premium grocery store in Korea. It was simply similar to the Whole foods market in the U.S. The store had many different kinds of organic foods and exotic imported groceries. The atmostphere or mood of store such as its interior, lighting and signages were very special and luxurious.The project was a big success, and our competitors started to begin some similar projects.

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