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제목 Traveling in the country 등록일 2020-10-06
내용 Recently, the reason that my familly and I only travel domsticlaay is due to Pendemic.
last summer, I was staying at a hotel in Pusan city with my wife and young son for 3days for vacation.
Pusan is the 2nd biggest city anb the city is a coast city in the southern province in Korea.
The hotel is in front of a wonderful and sandy beach. And also, the hotel has great dining restaurants and facilties such as a gym, a swiming pool and a souna.
The best memory was fantastic ocean scene through a big window in the hotel room So that we can get enough photoes.
담당강사 Marilee1 등록일 2020-10-07
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Recently, the reason that my familly and I only travel domstically is due to the Pandemic.
Last summer, I was stayed at a hotel in Pusan city with my wife and young son 3 days for vacation.
Pusan is the 2nd biggest city and is also a coastal city in the southern province in Korea.
The hotel was in front of a wonderful sandy beach. And the hotel also had great dining restaurants and other facilties such as a gym, a swiming pool and a sauna.
The best memory I have from the vacation is of the fantastic ocean scene through a big window in the hotel room. So we took lots of photos.

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