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제목 Traveling Abroad 등록일 2020-10-06
내용 When I travel abroad, I make sure to bring my passport and a copy of passport, a multi adaptor for travel and some cup-ramens.
First, I need my passport to get on a plane and enter a foreing coundtry. And also, I prepare for a copy in case of emergency such as when I lost mine. Second, a multi adaptor is must have item when I use electronics in other country because the electricity in each country is different. Finally, I bring enough cup-ramens. It is very helpful when I miss Korean food on a trip abroad.Furthermore, they are very convenient to carry and cook.Without them, I can't feel com
담당강사 Marilee1 등록일 2020-10-07
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When I travel abroad, I make sure to bring my passport and a copy of passport, a multi adaptor for travel and some cup-ramens.
First, I need my passport to get on a plane and enter a forgien country.  I also prepare a copy in case of emergency such as when I lost mine. Second, a multi adaptor is a must have item when I use electronics in other country because the electricity in each country is different. Finally, I bring enough cup-ramens to last me a few days. It is very helpful when I miss Korean food on a trip abroad. Furthermore, they are very convenient to carry and cook. Without them, I can't feel comfortable. 

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