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제목 | Hospital | 등록일 | 2020-10-22 |
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내용 | I don't like to go to the dental clinic. It is because it is so painful and very expensive. However, I could not put off visit to the dentist due to the problem of my gum. I had my theeth sclaled and then treated my gum. I felt that the pain was not serious but sad. It is because the dentist said 'It is time you paid more attention to your gums than to your cravities'. You know it means I am old enough. Since then, I have purchased gum-only toothpaste, toothbrush and mouthwash, and have been using them hard. |
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담당강사 | Marilee1 | 등록일 | 2020-11-05 |
첨삭 내용 | I don't like to go to the dental clinic. I dont like it because it is so painful and very expensive. However, I could not put off my visit to the dentist due to the problem of my gums. I had my teeth cleaned and then they treated my gums. |