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| 제목 | City life 1 | 등록일 | 2020-10-23 |
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| 내용 | I live in Seoul where is the biggest city in Korea. Here is my hometown and I have lived here as my age, over 40ty's. People say that there are too many people and cars. However, Seoul is surrounded by a lot of big and small mountain. So, I can enjoy enough nature whenever I want to go a mountain. People also say that Seoul citizens are so busy. Yes, I totally agree with it. However, they still are kind and warmful. One thing I don't like is crazy price of house. In addition that, we have only a few of option regarding house such apartment complex. |
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| 담당강사 | Marilee1 | 등록일 | 2020-11-05 |
| 첨삭 내용 | I live in Seoul it is the biggest city in Korea. This is my hometown and I have lived here as long in years as I am old, over 40 years. |
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