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제목 CITY LIFE 2 등록일 2020-10-29
내용 People in the city try to escape from the city life and want to enjoy nature on the weekends.
I said Seoul is surrounded by a lot of mountains. So, people go hiking a mountain.
These days, it is the seaon of autumn colors, I really love this seson. So, whenever I have a time, I go hiking a mountain near my place. The mountain is very closed to my house, It takes just 20minuites by walking.
Except mountains, people go Han river and parks in the city. In other words, people want to escape from the city life on the weekends.
담당강사 Marilee1 등록일 2020-11-05
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People in the city try to escape from the city life and want to enjoy nature on the weekends.
I said Seoul is surrounded by a lot of mountains. So, people go hiking in the mountains.
These days, it is the seaon of autumn colors, I really love this seson. So, whenever I have a time, I go hiking at a mountain near my place. The mountain is very closed to my house, It takes just 20 minuites by walking.
Except mountains, people go to the Han river and parks in the city. In other words, people want to escape from the city life on the weekends.

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