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제목 CITY LIFE 3 등록일 2020-11-02
내용 I went to a supermarket with my wife last Saturday.
Many young people say online shopping is more convenient and chipper than an offline market.
As for me, I absolutetly prefer going a supermarket for grocery. It is because I can check freshness of food and also try to eat some sample. In addition to those, I can get some discount such as time sale.
Even though it is a little bit inconvenient, I totally like go shopping in a super market for grocery.
담당강사 Marilee1 등록일 2020-11-05
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I went to a supermarket with my wife last Saturday.
Many young people say online shopping is more convenient and cheapper than the offline market.
As for me, I absolutley prefer going to a supermarket for groceries. It is because I can check the freshness of the food and also try to eat some samples. In addition to those things, I can also get some discounts such as one time sales.
Even though it is a little bit inconvenient, I totally like go shopping in a super market for grocery.

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