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제목 2020-11-05 (2) 등록일 2020-11-05
내용 - Regarding 'insulting emails', evidence submitted by Donghoon Kim was reviewed, but it was hard to say that they are 'insulting'. It seem that they are misunderstood due to their emotional distress.

- Nevertheless, The school shall receive the warning and submit the future plan for the improvement to JEINS since there were some inadequacies in terms of dealing with problem and management of employees.

Committee members were all JEINS managers. One exception was the Bursar from the school. He was one of the committee members too according to the Written Determination Form from JEINS.
담당강사 Neal2 등록일 2020-11-05
첨삭 내용

- Regarding 'insulting emails', evidence submitted by Donghoon Kim was reviewed, but it was hard to say that they are 'insulting'. It seem that they are misunderstood due to their emotional distress.

- Nevertheless, The school shall receive the warning and submit the future plan for the improvement to JEINS since there were some inadequacies in terms of dealing with problem and management of employees.

Committee members were all JEINS managers. One exception was the Bursar from the school. He was one of the committee members too according to the Written Determination Form from JEINS.**

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