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제목 Lunch 1 등록일 2020-11-24
내용 I usually have lunch at a company cafeteria with my team members.
What I gotta say, I go the company cafeteria for lunch because it is free and it is very convenient.
The company provide lunch as one of employee benefits. Menu is not bad as a company cafeteria.
You see, it is very convenient the cafeteria is really closed to my offce in the building.
Moreover, I always don't need to wait in a long line. So, I can finish my lunch in 20minuites.
That is why I prefer to go the company cafeteria for lunch.
담당강사 Heni1 등록일 2020-12-01
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I usually have lunch at a company cafeteria with my team members.
What I gotta say, I go the company cafeteria for lunch because it is free and it is very convenient.
The company provide lunch as one of employee benefits. Menu is not bad as a company cafeteria.
You see, it is very convenient the cafeteria is really closed to my offce in the building.
Moreover, I always don't need to wait in a long line. So, I can finish my lunch in 20minuites.
That is why I prefer to go the company cafeteria for lunch.

 

Corection:

I usually have lunch at THE company cafeteria with my team members.

I go to the company cafteria because it is free and it is very convenient.  ( Never use GOTTA in writing)

You see, it is convenient because it is very close to my office in the same building.

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