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제목 | Lunch 1 | 등록일 | 2020-11-24 |
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내용 | I usually have lunch at a company cafeteria with my team members. What I gotta say, I go the company cafeteria for lunch because it is free and it is very convenient. The company provide lunch as one of employee benefits. Menu is not bad as a company cafeteria. You see, it is very convenient the cafeteria is really closed to my offce in the building. Moreover, I always don't need to wait in a long line. So, I can finish my lunch in 20minuites. That is why I prefer to go the company cafeteria for lunch. |
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담당강사 | Heni1 | 등록일 | 2020-12-01 |
첨삭 내용 | I usually have lunch at a company cafeteria with my team members.
Corection: I usually have lunch at THE company cafeteria with my team members. I go to the company cafteria because it is free and it is very convenient. ( Never use GOTTA in writing) You see, it is convenient because it is very close to my office in the same building. |