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제목 Persuasion 등록일 2020-12-01
내용 Hi, I am Evan.
You know what? They are comming. Band Blue is coming back again 10years after they announced their retirement.
You see, I really loved them when I was a university student.
If I go to the concert, it is like a time travel on a time machine. It would be really memorable event.
Please, don't let me go alone there.
If you go there toghether, I m gonna take you a great restaurant after the concert. I promise.
Of course, I definetly will pick you up at your place.
담당강사 Heni1 등록일 2020-12-03
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Hi, I am Evan.
You know what? They are coMing!. Band Blue is coming back again, ten years after they announced their retirement.
You see, I really loved them when I was a university student.
If I go to the concert, it WILL BE like a time travel machine. It would be A really memorable event.
Please, don't let me go  there. ALONE.
If WE go there toGEther, I m GOING TO take you TO  a great restaurant after the concert. I promise.
Of course, I definITELY will pick you up at your place.

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