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제목 | I had a normal weekend. | 등록일 | 2020-12-01 |
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내용 | Suddenly the COVID19 got worse and the weather got cold, so I spent at home on weekends. I woke up, have breakfast, washed dishes, watched TV,, studied programs and I drank soju with my wife. I try to spend a happy moment with my sons on weekends. example I cook delicious food, study, and play games. In the past, we has been disastrous when we were under Japanese colonial. We should study history so that this never happens to anyone again. I also aloud reading books with children. I think it is important to study history. Have a good day. |
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담당강사 | Jean | 등록일 | 2020-12-02 |
첨삭 내용 | Suddenly the COVID19 got worse and the weather got cold, so I spent at home on weekends. Suddenly COVID19 got worsed and the weather got cold, so I stayed at home on weekend. I woke up, had breakfast, washed the dishes, watched TV, studied programs and I drank soju with my wife. I try to spend a happy moment with my sons on weekends. For example I cook delicious food, study, and play games. In the past, we had been disastrous, when we were under Japanese colonial. We should study history so that this never happens to anyone again. We should study history so, that this won't happen to anyone again. I also aloud reading books with children. I think it is important to study history. I also read books with my children. I think it is important to study history. Have a good day. ============================== Dear Andy, I agree with you, that we should study our own history. Have a good dat! Regards Jean |