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제목 | Concert 1 | 등록일 | 2020-12-02 |
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내용 | Recently we didn't go concert because of covid 19. A long time ago, when i and my wife were honeymoon in Croatia, we experienced special concert. Concert was held in the ancient building which isn't roof. We could see the star during the concert. The concert hall was not as big as i expected, but it was elegantly decorate with beautiful flowers and comfortable seats. Stage was very close so we could see Perfomers well. We couldn't listen language well, but music was awesome, atmosphere was fantastic. It was the best experience ever. | ||
담당강사 | Danielle2 | 등록일 | 2020-12-03 |
첨삭 내용 | Recently we couldn't go to the concert because of covid 19. A long time ago, while my wife and I were honeymooning in Croatia, we experienced a special concert. The concert was held in the ancient stadium. We could see the stars during the concert. The concert hall was not as big as I expected, but it was elegantly decorated with beautiful flowers and comfortable seats. The stage was very close so we could see performers well. We couldn't understand the language well, but the music was awesome and the atmosphere was fantastic. It was the best experience ever. |