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제목 concert 2 등록일 2020-12-04
내용 Before marriage, i and my wife went to the concert of 박효신 singer. I hadn't gone to the concert before, so we expected. Fortunately our seats were upgraded when we issued tickets. We could see the singer in close distance. All of the audience including me were waiting for the concert to start. However there was no sign of starting the performance. Without knowing why the audience began to stir. 20 minutes later singer appeared. But he looked like a sick person. He was sorry to the audience, because he caught a cold and didn't sing. We were disappointed. Leaving our regret behind
담당강사 Danielle2 등록일 2020-12-04
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Before marriage, i and my wife went to a concert by 박효신 singer. I hadn't gone to the concert before, so we expected. Fortunately, our seats were upgraded when we were issued tickets. We could see the singer at a close distance. All of the audience members including myself were waiting for the concert to start. However, there was no sign of starting the performance. Without knowing why the audience began to stir. 20 minutes later the singer appeared. But he looked like a sick person. He apologized to the audience because he caught a cold and didn't sing. We were disappointed. Leaving our regret behind

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