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제목 Self Introduction 등록일 2020-12-07
내용 Hi, I am Evan.
Well. It is always hard to introduce my self to someone.
Um, but what I most like to do thesedays is to have a time with my young son, he is just 8years old.
You know, I have tried to do what I can do with him together, what he can ejoy. I mean it includes everything, such as food, exercising, and hobby, except wine. Honestly, I am wine lover.
Any way, hopefully I want him to remember me as a good daddy in the future.
I think that is pretty much all about my self.
담당강사 Heni1 등록일 2020-12-09
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Hi, I am Evan.
Well,.it is always hard to introduce myself to someone.
But what I most like to do these days is to have (a) time with my young son WHO is just 8 years old.
You know, I have tried to do what I can do with him and me together, what he can eNjoy. I mean THAT includes everything, such as food, exercising, and hobbies, except wine. Honestly, I am A wine lover.
Anyway, hopefully, I want him to remember me as a good daddy when he grows up.
I think that is pretty much all about myself.

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