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제목 Diary of plogging 1 등록일 2020-12-07
내용 This was the first plogging with strangers who have passions to save the earth.
After we visited the zero-waste shop positioned in Ttuckseom and learned what they pursue for with this shop and how these eco-friendly stuffs can be made, we started running in Seoul Forest!!!
In the park, there were not many trashes because the park periodically was cleaned. However, we could find countless hided trashes in the edge of park and clean this area for an hour.
The author in a book defined that the adult is the person who pick trashes up, even though he or she doesn’t throw it on the street.
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This was the first plogging with strangers who have the passion to save the earth.


After we visited the zero-waste shop positioned in Ttuckseom and learned what they want to pursue for  and how these eco-friendly stuff can be made, we started running in Seoul Forest!!!


In the park, there were not many trashes because the park periodically was cleaned.

However, we found countless hidden trashes at the edge of the park and cleaned this area for an hour.


The author in a book defined that the adult is the person who picks trashes up, even though he or she doesn’t throw it on the street.

 

 

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